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<span style="color:#35B214">>>This is like those shitty teeny bopper animus where despite endless sexual tension the protagonist never quite makes it to her pooper.   
This is like those shitty teeny bopper animus where despite endless sexual tension the protagonist never quite makes it to her pooper.   
  >The only reason 4chan cares is because you started out with contemplating how to rape the loli. Now it's all retarded and angsty. </span>
  The only reason 4chan cares is because you started out with contemplating how to rape the loli. Now it's all retarded and angsty.  
    
    
I beg your pardon, sir. Neither of us are teenagers.   
I beg your pardon, sir. Neither of us are teenagers.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>i cant tell if your talking about a loli or a grandma </span>
i cant tell if your talking about a loli or a grandma  
    
    
What should I do, toss in my pizza metaphors? Flat chest euphemisms? Toss me a bone here.   
What should I do, toss in my pizza metaphors? Flat chest euphemisms? Toss me a bone here.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>hey nurse-kun. quick question:   
hey nurse-kun. quick question:   
  >in the beginning, you wanted to stick it in the loli's pooper, but now you kinda have an emotional bond with the loli. Yu attitude seems to have changed. You don't seem to lust over her as much. Do you wanna help her or just rape her?  </span>
  in the beginning, you wanted to stick it in the loli's pooper, but now you kinda have an emotional bond with the loli. Yu attitude seems to have changed. You don't seem to lust over her as much. Do you wanna help her or just rape her?   
    
    
For the record, I never actually said I WANTED to stick it in her pooper. Even the remarks I did make were asking /b/ if I SHOULD stick it in her pooper. And providing risk/benefit details for analysis. Through a /b/ filter.   
For the record, I never actually said I WANTED to stick it in her pooper. Even the remarks I did make were asking /b/ if I SHOULD stick it in her pooper. And providing risk/benefit details for analysis. Through a /b/ filter.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>I didn't say otherwise. I said it was angsty and retarded, just like teeny bopper animus.   
I didn't say otherwise. I said it was angsty and retarded, just like teeny bopper animus.   
  >Anyway, this story doesn't morally bother me. Better to be under the wing of a caring pedo than an uncaring orphanage, as far as I can see.   
  Anyway, this story doesn't morally bother me. Better to be under the wing of a caring pedo than an uncaring orphanage, as far as I can see.   
  >But at this rate, how long are we going to have to wait for the pooper? At this point it's become a tl;dr. </span>
  But at this rate, how long are we going to have to wait for the pooper? At this point it's become a tl;dr.
    
    
Well, angst has become a dirty word these days, tainted by the retarded antics of emo kids and goth faggots for longer than most of those current emo kids and goth faggots have been alive. In that vein (cut 4 attention, lols), I don't know that her situation would qualify as 'angsty', in the current use of the word.   
Well, angst has become a dirty word these days, tainted by the retarded antics of emo kids and goth faggots for longer than most of those current emo kids and goth faggots have been alive. In that vein (cut 4 attention, lols), I don't know that her situation would qualify as 'angsty', in the current use of the word.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>Anonynurse, please forgive us concerning how this thread started as hostile right away. It's just standart 4chan greeting, for once in a while. </span> 
Anonynurse, please forgive us concerning how this thread started as hostile right away. It's just standart 4chan greeting, for once in a while.  
    
    
Hey, I have no problem with being NIGGERed.   
Hey, I have no problem with being NIGGERed.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>Blog. Blog. Blog. Blog. Blog.   
Blog. Blog. Blog. Blog. Blog.   
  >You need to make a blog.   
  You need to make a blog.   
  >Period.  </span>
  Period.   
    
    
Unnessecery variables make for unnessecery hassles, you know?   
Unnessecery variables make for unnessecery hassles, you know?   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>Anonynurse, will you see her on Christmas? Because I am positive that you seeing her on that date would do loads to better her condition. </span>
Anonynurse, will you see her on Christmas? Because I am positive that you seeing her on that date would do loads to better her condition.  
 
 
I'll probably be working on christmas, yeah...likely double-shifting, due to my martial/family status.   
I'll probably be working on christmas, yeah...likely double-shifting, due to my martial/family status.   
    
    
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>I'd say that he's as much pedo as the average /b/-tard. That is, he may like loli but also like other porn, he may think of it as wrong and right at the same time and thinks it depends on the situation, he may wonder about it but isn't dumbshit enough to fuck with that in the real world. </span>
>>17607973 In my opinion, nurse-kun is not an actual pedo.
I'd say that he's as much pedo as the average /b/-tard. That is, he may like loli but also like other porn, he may think of it as wrong and right at the same time and thinks it depends on the situation, he may wonder about it but isn't dumbshit enough to fuck with that in the real world.  
    
    
Actually, I don't even have any loli porn. Was never particularly interested, though, yes, as someone in /b/, I can hardly be said to have a small amount of familiarity with it.   
Actually, I don't even have any loli porn. Was never particularly interested, though, yes, as someone in /b/, I can hardly be said to have a small amount of familiarity with it.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>I think you should have kissed her forehead as well... would have been sweet and reassuring - or at least do it once she is asleep bwahahahahaa!!  </span>
I think you should have kissed her forehead as well... would have been sweet and reassuring - or at least do it once she is asleep bwahahahahaa!!   
    
    
Kissing is in a whole different realm of acceptability from a hug. I've seen plenty of nurses hugging patients. Hell, I've hugged patients, particularly people so old and decrepit they've more or less looped back around to the mentality and emotional needs of children. The shrink said hugging could be ok if I was reasonable and sensible about it.   
Kissing is in a whole different realm of acceptability from a hug. I've seen plenty of nurses hugging patients. Hell, I've hugged patients, particularly people so old and decrepit they've more or less looped back around to the mentality and emotional needs of children. The shrink said hugging could be ok if I was reasonable and sensible about it.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>I wonder, I'm not sure how good her reading comprehension is but nurse-kun said that she had a mighty fine education. Would she be ready to start a solid book?   
I wonder, I'm not sure how good her reading comprehension is but nurse-kun said that she had a mighty fine education. Would she be ready to start a solid book?   
  >Because then I'd suggest Harry Potter. She might identity herself to a protagonist who lost both his parents, was placed in a House of Hell and then got out finely.  </span>
  Because then I'd suggest Harry Potter. She might identity herself to a protagonist who lost both his parents, was placed in a House of Hell and then got out finely.   
    
    
Well, she certainly seems very intelligent to me, and was, from the gossip, in a school for the gifted of some sort. I wouldn't put it past her to have already read them all.   
Well, she certainly seems very intelligent to me, and was, from the gossip, in a school for the gifted of some sort. I wouldn't put it past her to have already read them all.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>Harry Potter might seem a bad idea because it focuses on conflict and it has lotsa descriptions of dark areas that could just fuck her mind up even more. Maybe a more lighthearted book would be better.   
Harry Potter might seem a bad idea because it focuses on conflict and it has lotsa descriptions of dark areas that could just fuck her mind up even more. Maybe a more lighthearted book would be better.   
  >If i were to recommend any book it would be this   
  If i were to recommend any book it would be this   
  >Dear Pup: Letters to a Young Dog by Diana Pullein-Thompson  </span>
  Dear Pup: Letters to a Young Dog by Diana Pullein-Thompson   
    
    
Thank you, I'll look into that...   
Thank you, I'll look into that...   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>eeer what about kissing in France ?   
eeer what about kissing in France ?   
  >French kiss for saying hello (only men/women and women/women or perhaps men/men in family) but not on the lips. "French kiss" is only for lovers, even in France
  French kiss for saying hello (only men/women and women/women or perhaps men/men in family) but not on the lips. "French kiss" is only for lovers, even in France
  >For that, go Russia.  </span>
  For that, go Russia.   
    
    
Any kissing, I meant, which is why I used France as an example, where non-lip kissing is casual. Cheek, forehead, wherever, it's a no-go.   
Any kissing, I meant, which is why I used France as an example, where non-lip kissing is casual. Cheek, forehead, wherever, it's a no-go.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>anonynurse, i cant say i get you. its starting to really boggle my brain. Maybe its not just you, you lust over the loli but youre smart and are just a nice guy. thats cool. but why the heck are /b/tards eating this up, myself included?  </span>
anonynurse, i cant say i get you. its starting to really boggle my brain. Maybe its not just you, you lust over the loli but youre smart and are just a nice guy. thats cool. but why the heck are /b/tards eating this up, myself included?   
    
    
I dunno, I'd never experienced anything like this in /b/ before either...I mean, it's /b/. But, as a /b/tard that regards, with extreme disdain, the vast majority of other internets communities as vile pits of retarded excrement, where else was I going to post it?   
I dunno, I'd never experienced anything like this in /b/ before either...I mean, it's /b/. But, as a /b/tard that regards, with extreme disdain, the vast majority of other internets communities as vile pits of retarded excrement, where else was I going to post it?   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>Just to expand, The Secret Garden is about a little girl who lost her family and who is always mean and frustrated at the start. She's sent to a distant relative's house to live with. She slowly gets better socially after a grumpy old gardener remark to her "I think we're alike, we both don't like people and we both don't realise it". Later on, she discovers that there is a sick boy also living in the relative's house but stays shut in his room all the time. Everybody tells him that he's sick and crippled (bad back). She brings him outside, introduce him to a farm boy, they work together in a (secret) garden and in the end he yells "See! I'm alright! I'm not sick! (IN YOUR FACE!)", which makes the old gardener cry.   
Just to expand, The Secret Garden is about a little girl who lost her family and who is always mean and frustrated at the start. She's sent to a distant relative's house to live with. She slowly gets better socially after a grumpy old gardener remark to her "I think we're alike, we both don't like people and we both don't realise it". Later on, she discovers that there is a sick boy also living in the relative's house but stays shut in his room all the time. Everybody tells him that he's sick and crippled (bad back). She brings him outside, introduce him to a farm boy, they work together in a (secret) garden and in the end he yells "See! I'm alright! I'm not sick! (IN YOUR FACE!)", which makes the old gardener cry.   
  >It's an incredibly positive book. </span>
  It's an incredibly positive book.  
    
    
I know, I know it turns out nicely. Fuck, the christmas stage in Elite Beat Agents turns out nicely too (assuming you don't fuck it up).   
I know, I know it turns out nicely. Fuck, the christmas stage in Elite Beat Agents turns out nicely too (assuming you don't fuck it up).   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>I was going to draw a pic of her and I was just wondering, in which side of the room is her bed, u said it was by a wall, dose that make her lie on the left or right side when turning out from the wall?  </span>
I was going to draw a pic of her and I was just wondering, in which side of the room is her bed, u said it was by a wall, dose that make her lie on the left or right side when turning out from the wall?   
    
    
If one were to 'face' the room from outside the hallway, and the far wall from the door/hallway wall were posited as 'North', the door would be in the south-east corner, her bed is at the northwest corner, length-wise against the west wall top-wise against the north wall, her bedside table is up along the top, at the north wall, there's a window above it, a dresser and the lone chair are in the northeast corner, the door leading to her bathroom is south of her bed, near the southwest corner. Her wheelchair is generally between her bedside table and the dresser.   
If one were to 'face' the room from outside the hallway, and the far wall from the door/hallway wall were posited as 'North', the door would be in the south-east corner, her bed is at the northwest corner, length-wise against the west wall top-wise against the north wall, her bedside table is up along the top, at the north wall, there's a window above it, a dresser and the lone chair are in the northeast corner, the door leading to her bathroom is south of her bed, near the southwest corner. Her wheelchair is generally between her bedside table and the dresser.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>This may sound gay but thanks. I'm still in high school and thinking about what I should do for the rest of my life. Though this story, real or not, has been quite strange, it has really helped me decide that I would like to be someway involved in Medicine be it Nurse, Doctor, or w/e. I wish you good luck in helping stablilize this girl's life.  </span>
To OP,
This may sound gay but thanks. I'm still in high school and thinking about what I should do for the rest of my life. Though this story, real or not, has been quite strange, it has really helped me decide that I would like to be someway involved in Medicine be it Nurse, Doctor, or w/e. I wish you good luck in helping stablilize this girl's life.   
    
    
Good for you! I was in a similar position, picking between doctor, paramedic, or nurse, and I'll admit that nurse was the last of the three choices. But here I am, and I'd say it's been a rewarding choice, and I'm glad I made it, though I have little but admiration for paramedics and doctors as well, though the latter can be pricks at times, but hey.   
Good for you! I was in a similar position, picking between doctor, paramedic, or nurse, and I'll admit that nurse was the last of the three choices. But here I am, and I'd say it's been a rewarding choice, and I'm glad I made it, though I have little but admiration for paramedics and doctors as well, though the latter can be pricks at times, but hey.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>HAY Nurse-kun.   
HAY Nurse-kun.   
  >Is it possible for the loli to be albino or something?  </span>
  Is it possible for the loli to be albino or something?   
    
    
Well, I guess it WAS possible, back when she was still a hypothetical combination of her parents' genes, but she isn't, so...   
Well, I guess it WAS possible, back when she was still a hypothetical combination of her parents' genes, but she isn't, so...   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>Thought you said you were going home to visit family for the weekend? </span>
Thought you said you were going home to visit family for the weekend?  
 
 
No, I said I was probably going to spend at least part of the day with them. Which I'll try to, for the morning, at least. I'll likely be working the day and night shift, still, though.   
No, I said I was probably going to spend at least part of the day with them. Which I'll try to, for the morning, at least. I'll likely be working the day and night shift, still, though.   
It's not a very long trip to the family home, so it isn't that big a deal to go both ways in one day/morning.   
It's not a very long trip to the family home, so it isn't that big a deal to go both ways in one day/morning.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>Here's a link to an Amazon list of "Enchanting books for girls ages 7-14" _   
Here's a link to an Amazon list of "Enchanting books for girls ages 7-14" _   
  ><http://www.amazon.com/Enchanting-Stories-Girls-ages-7-14/lm/2WY53X94YKP4B''>   
  <http://www.amazon.com/Enchanting-Stories-Girls-ages-7-14/lm/2WY53X94YKP4B''>   
  >Might find that a decent starting place if you're interested in getting her a book for Christmas.  </span>
  Might find that a decent starting place if you're interested in getting her a book for Christmas.   
    
    
Thank you, this is quite helpful.   
Thank you, this is quite helpful.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>Are you doing anything special for christmas for her?  </span>
Are you doing anything special for christmas for her?   
    
    
I'm still not sure, I'm considering the possibilities. If I do work christmas day, I'll have to deal with all the patients, not just her, so dedicated and singular attention/events for her are unlikely to happen...I'll have to speak with the rest of the staff about all this over the next few days.   
I'm still not sure, I'm considering the possibilities. If I do work christmas day, I'll have to deal with all the patients, not just her, so dedicated and singular attention/events for her are unlikely to happen...I'll have to speak with the rest of the staff about all this over the next few days.   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>Nurse-kun, keep up the good work. My mother was a CNA and several of my friends have nurses for mothers. I've seen the horrid conditions people can end up in while staying in the nursing home.   
Nurse-kun, keep up the good work. My mother was a CNA and several of my friends have nurses for mothers. I've seen the horrid conditions people can end up in while staying in the nursing home.   
  >Thank whatever gods you worship that you can do something for this little girl.  </span>
  Thank whatever gods you worship that you can do something for this little girl.   
    
    
Well, I can only try. I mean, even as terrible as they can be, and I am aware of those boundries, at least the vast majority of people living in nursing homes are at the end of their lives, their hopes and dreams and triumphs behind them...whereas it's just the opposite for her. Which makes the degrading and hopeless aspects of even the best nursing homes...well...   
Well, I can only try. I mean, even as terrible as they can be, and I am aware of those boundries, at least the vast majority of people living in nursing homes are at the end of their lives, their hopes and dreams and triumphs behind them...whereas it's just the opposite for her. Which makes the degrading and hopeless aspects of even the best nursing homes...well...   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>desu </span>
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desu
    
    
Already answered, but just to address anyone considering drawing her:   
Already answered, but just to address anyone considering drawing her:   
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<span style="color:#35B214">>>Well, you might decide not to keep going daily, but please keep us informed one way or another. </span>
Well, you might decide not to keep going daily, but please keep us informed one way or another.  
    
    
I'll try to, though it's starting to seem like daily updates aren't wanted. I'm not here to make /b/ unhappy, after all.
I'll try to, though it's starting to seem like daily updates aren't wanted. I'm not here to make /b/ unhappy, after all.
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